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#1 User is offline   Redhandstudios 

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Posted 17 February 2006 - 12:33 PM

For five and twenty years have spent,
since last our storm tossed lives did meet.
To cast about our lots in life,
like broken twigs beneath our feet.

Across the bounds of time and space,
my heart longing just to see your face.
But we two are never meant to be,
A tragic fate for you, for me.

So we tread on through life, from day to day.
Not realy alive, nor dead... I'd say.
Our paths do cross from time to time,
but not enough to make you mine.
"What is best might be different tomorrow or the next day-- but what is right and wrong...Those things will stay the same for a thousand years." ---The Shroud, from Ms. Marvel #8---

"We are not talking about money. We are talking about 15 million dollars. Money is what you take to the grocery store. It's what you get out of an ATM. 15 million dollars is motive with a universal adapter attatched to it!" ---Way of the Gun.---


"We can not be rats anymore, Mrs. Brisby. We know to much." Nicodemus, The Secret of NIMH.

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Posted 17 February 2006 - 07:09 PM

First verse: 8/10
Second verse: 7/10
Third: 5.9/10.
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Posted 18 February 2006 - 12:19 AM

View PostKaizer Kaizer, on Feb 17 2006, 07:09 PM, said:

First verse: 8/10
Second verse: 7/10
Third: 5.9/10.


Totaly higher than I would have rated it...and I wrote it! ::D:
"What is best might be different tomorrow or the next day-- but what is right and wrong...Those things will stay the same for a thousand years." ---The Shroud, from Ms. Marvel #8---

"We are not talking about money. We are talking about 15 million dollars. Money is what you take to the grocery store. It's what you get out of an ATM. 15 million dollars is motive with a universal adapter attatched to it!" ---Way of the Gun.---


"We can not be rats anymore, Mrs. Brisby. We know to much." Nicodemus, The Secret of NIMH.

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