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Master Paints - a Haiku

#1 User is offline   SaintRigger 

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Posted 19 January 2005 - 11:58 AM

Reaper master paints
Their pigments are very strong
Like Mengu's Brush Skills.
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#2 User is online   kit 

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Posted 19 January 2005 - 12:26 PM

Strong meter. Doesn't evoke the natural imagery inherent in classical haiku, but that's okay: it features a Reaper Product and a Reaper Peep, so it's okay by me. :;):

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#3 User is online   Spike 

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Posted 22 January 2005 - 04:32 PM

Aw.. ease up on the lad, Kit.

To express ones self
in seventeen syllables
is very diffi-
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Aio, quantitas magna caseus est!
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